Said By a Girl

my heart weeps in your wake
for only yours to forever take
my tears they fall like rain
hoping to mend the pain
my life is shaken by your departure
only to make it just a bit harder
my thoughts are of you
thinking what did i ever do
my words are nothing in your world
just rambling mumbles said by a girl
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
August 28, 2009 at 11:29 AM
I enjoyed reading your splendid poetry today Autumn. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
August 27, 2009 at 11:27 AM
Well, is this a wake like when a person dies or just like a wake of a boat? Interesting and sad. Keep writing. Sara
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August 27, 2009 at 11:15 AM
Nice write Autumn, a touch of sadness in this poem>>James
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