Said and Done

Over!
When, how, where was I 
 when the dream had come?
When it's all said and done
 it's the emptiness that stays.
Life moves so fast, 
 quick in the years that pass.
What was I thinking?
We had thought our time was forever
 full of the laughter and tears treasured,
 every day a joy and pleasure
 each word and hug tenuously measured;
time doesn't wait
 and we can miss the moment when we hesitate
 then suddenly it's over regrets too late,
 smile for me, just once more
when love takes away the pleasures of life
 and everything is said and done
 and love slips away, gone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Thayer Avatar
February 24, 2020 at 12:56 PM
DM...I CRIED READING THIS...MY HEART STRINGS TUGGED...LOVELY! I ALSO LOVE YOUR DOXIE PHOTO....I HAVE A MINI DACHSHUND...I LOVE. VICKIE
Theraven Avatar
February 19, 2020 at 10:19 AM
DM, There's so much feeling in this poem 'Said and Done'. To leave your precious days in a poem.,so hard sometimes. But so necessary. -Richard
Turner Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 4:26 PM
...too many left behind. One of the down sides of ageing. . Nicely penned, DM.
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