Saharan Dust

Saharan dust gold round the lake’s edge squirrels make merry

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Joe Dimino

Date: 1/30/2023 9:56:00 AM

Squirrels are indeed survivors, thinking and planning well in advance -- after all is said and done, roaches, rats, pigeons, and now squirrels added to my list, of stout survivors. I probably got this all wrong, but excellent inspirational write!

Gary Radice

Date: 1/28/2023 4:08:00 AM

I see colours reading this: Gold, red, grey, silver - mainly thanks to the images I have in my mind of squirrels burrowing and digging down following a Saharan dust storm. Cheers - Gary

Peter Rees
Date: 1/28/2023 7:03:00 AM

Many thanks Gary for the way you have viewed this haiku- much appreciated.