Saharan Dust

Saharan dust 
gold round the lake’s edge
squirrels make merry
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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DiMino Avatar
January 30, 2023 at 9:56 AM
Squirrels are indeed survivors, thinking and planning well in advance -- after all is said and done, roaches, rats, pigeons, and now squirrels added to my list, of stout survivors. I probably got this all wrong, but excellent inspirational write!
Radice Avatar
January 28, 2023 at 4:08 AM
I see colours reading this: Gold, red, grey, silver - mainly thanks to the images I have in my mind of squirrels burrowing and digging down following a Saharan dust storm. Cheers - Gary
Rees Avatar
January 28, 2023 at 7:03 AM
Many thanks Gary for the way you have viewed this haiku- much appreciated.
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