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Sahara Moon

The Sahara's flaring moon
weaves sand castles in hombre dusk,
jacquard ridges unraveling down burlap slopes.

Under taupe sky a balmy loom 
spins dust into tawny gold for a sultan sun,
eroding an oasis to sate his rapture
with effete wealth tatted in the shadows
cast by white peacock clouds
floating above seedless dunes
once shimmering with emerald palms
and sapphire waters.

Unseen hands of a sightless pearl
now craft his exfoliated sheikdom
from the dry scraps of Eden.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ravidas Avatar
April 23, 2019 at 12:51 PM
I feel like a seedless dune upon reading you, Dale. No chance to write smth as beautiful as this moon.
Cozart Avatar
April 23, 2019 at 1:00 PM
Thank you, Kurt.
Gauthier Avatar
September 8, 2018 at 6:45 PM
Back with more congrats, Dale.v34
Dietrich Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 4:49 PM
Your imagery is off the charts, Dale. Even making sand sound so gorgeous!
Cozart Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 5:07 PM
Thanks for reading, Andrea.
Neumann Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 4:42 AM
Simply wow. Many wishes, Kai
Cozart Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 8:20 AM
Thanks, Kai.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 4:27 PM
Hello Dale Gregory Cozart, a beautiful photo of the dessert sunset.The sand forms a different pattern of beauty. The full moon is so pretty. Have a nice evening my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 5:02 PM
I was hoping you would answer my comment.I like the dessert scene and the setting sun. it is beautiful.
Gauthier Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 12:21 PM
Lovely, Dale. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Cozart Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 12:30 PM
Thanks very much, Line
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 9:56 AM
A truly exquisite ekphrasis Dale! Your use of dynamic and dramatic words to describe the imagery make this poem really special. I loved this beauty! Congratulations on your win! : )
Cozart Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 10:08 AM
Thanks so much, Connie.
Canerdy Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 9:29 PM
So beautifully descriptive, Dale. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
Cozart Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 8:05 AM
Thank you, Janice,
Sands Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 7:04 PM
Beautifully written Excellent ! ;)
Cozart Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 7:33 PM
Thanks so much, Heidi. Nice to hear from you.
Ashley Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 11:04 PM
Such exquisite textured and spectacular imagery, Dale; 'jacquard ridges unraveling down burlap slopes' and 'spins dust into tawny gold for a sultan sun' - such rich dynamic poetry and I especially love the use of the word 'tawny' - one of my favorite words.. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Cozart Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 7:40 AM
Thanks very much, Susan.
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