Noel Villarosa Poet Rhyme

Sagging Dreams

Blown into tiny smithereens
Festooned with velvet drapes
A nightly dream, what could it mean
Holding the fast escape

Waiting to meet another sun
Dreams lined up the clothesline
Sagging to revive unread plan
Let free my confined mind



Date: March 30, 2015

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Kp Nunez April 23, 2015 at 1:54 AM Continue to cherish your dreams, kabayan. Blessings! 7. :) Kim

Eve Roper March 30, 2015 at 2:34 PM Very creative piece, a 7, and good luck in the contest. Blessings eve

Njeri Hunjeri March 30, 2015 at 5:27 AM I like your take on this. Its very creative. All the best in the contest.