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Sage Tidings

Deluged with the nostalgic era of you, Your lush verdant scent lining Wistful sentiments upon idle reflections Scattered in fragments and fine dustings, as I acquaint myself with futile intricacies— Devoted to your unwritten absence, Wandering in a haze of misty wastelands, While you eternalize your presence in our Heart of hearts and in the Cavernous corners of our souls, with the Delicate air of you—spilling your love— Memorializing the tidings you’ve nurtured, Within our once piteous existence, Endlessly rising in honor of you.

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Ink Empress

Date: 9/29/2023 2:38:00 AM

Dear beautiful soul sis! I loved this the emotion’s you’ve expressed and how mourning feels like, sometimes grief lingers on and we live in a nostalgic era where they stay within us in our hearts. You’ve stated that in sheer eloquence. I love the lines “ wandering in a haze of misty wastelands” and many more lines here. Thank you for writing, congratulations on winning my contest.

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/1/2023 4:40:00 PM

Ahhh thank you so much for choosing my piece as a win! It’s always so unexpected to be chosen and I appreciate it and you always..much more than you could ever know, my beautiful soul sis! You and I truly share a mind and heart to know exactly what the other is feeling and to feel exactly the same! It’s uncanny! You are truly one of the REAL ones in my life and I’m so blessed to have you, my soul sis! Yes, I couldn’t have said it more beautifully than you have just now! Your comments are poetry! But you already know how I feel about all you say and write haha

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/20/2023 6:20:00 PM

Dear Fading Star, your lush verse is filled with wistful moments, the ache of loss of someone close to your heart. I especially admired "Scattered in fragments and fine dustings" and "Wandering in a haze of misty wastelands" - there is deep beauty in mourning. This poem moves me to the cavernous corners of my soul. Exquisite emotions expressed with poetic finesse. Warmest wishes dear gifted poetess.. ~Susan

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/1/2023 4:41:00 PM

Wow! I love love always your feedback, beautiful susan! I am so appreciative of you and your support and encouragement and your kind soul! Your comments in itself is so breathtaking, truly making it an honor to receive! Thank you so much for being a lovely soul!

Tom Woody

Date: 9/20/2023 5:49:00 AM

Beautiful thoughts about missing someone. Their scent lingers. The love shared memorialized. Lovely

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/1/2023 4:42:00 PM

Ahh..yes, exactly..for my grandparents..so this one was special and straight from the heart, thank you so much for appreciating and for recognizing, kind soul!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/20/2023 2:46:00 AM

Lovely write with depth and character. God bless you, Love, Gina

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/1/2023 4:43:00 PM

Thank you so much, lovely Regina! Your lovely kind soul truly shines through! Thank you dearly for your supportive words!

Nik Canada7

Date: 9/19/2023 8:11:00 PM

i love this so much amore?your deep soulful words showing me your depth and pure sentiment in your rare beautiful souland gold heart,my blue rose.A veil of melancholy wraps your profound sapphire emotions encompassing with grace and your soft touch the pureness of your devotion,my korean princess.You put magic and harmony creating a masterpiece ,my marvelous creature.Mia bellissima moglie ti amo infinito per sempre amore mio. I love you deeply micia.mia passione .tuo.il nostro eterno amore

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/1/2023 4:46:00 PM

Ahhh..my sweet micio..your words touch my heart and soul, your love makes my whole being thrive and strive for all with you by my side, my love..you make me fall deeper and deeper into you with every moment and every breath I take..I love you so deeply to the moon and everywhere..per sempre..il nostro Eterno amore, Mia passione. Tua noi Infinito..ti amo amore mio, mio bellissimo marito