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Saffron Skylines


Silk-
starfish
of fervent
fate weaves soft-quartz 
feathers of marshmallow metaphors that 
croon with firefly's fluorescence amidst life's
claustrophobic 
clouds, shading
bitter
smogs 
with
plush sweet-
dahlias;
And I chase light
within saffron skylines beyond dreamscapes.

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Jeanette Swan

Date: 1/5/2024 4:01:00 PM

The like the mystical quality of your poetry with your use of alliterative juxtapositions like 'marshmallow metaphors' and 'silk-starfish'.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/5/2023 5:11:00 AM

Creative wording of your tetractys reads like a good contender if for a contest. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my pages. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/27/2023 5:29:00 PM

You did an excellent job in this Teyractys, dear Hiya. Your choice of words is divine, and the vision you have created is breathtaking. There is a particular enchantment to your writing in addition to how simply it flows. You are quite good at utilizing your strengths.

Silent One

Date: 11/22/2023 10:48:00 AM

You did these so well.. an excellent selection of words by the angelic star you are... and wonderful imagery that flows so well.. there is magic in your pen and you used it so well..

Jay Narain

Date: 11/20/2023 10:34:00 AM

Nice poem. I did not see your poems in the new PS anthology book. Are you a life time member? If you need help, I can sponsor you to become one. You are a great writer,

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/20/2023 2:53:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great Tetractys poem in Ink Empress contest, Hiya :) - hugs

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 11/18/2023 8:59:00 AM

You painted a lifelike picture with this poem. This is an enjoyable read.

Ink Empress

Date: 11/18/2023 4:37:00 AM

Dear angelic star, i dunno where to begin praising your ethereal and magical tetractys! Youve really nailed it and its easy for me to place you cus you always write like how i love, and you have improved alot in keeping your words concise. I really love the alliterations descriptive diction and flow of this one, truly profound! Especially marshmallow metaphors and dahlias and saffron skylines! Ethereal write! Congratulations on your win. Well deserved. Pleasure reading