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Safe Keeping

safe keeping I put you in a safe place in my heart. we had words you left into the looming dark. I saw you with more clarity, and yet, I hold you in a safe place in my heart.

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Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/19/2017 10:36:00 AM

Short and potent, my favourite kind of poetry. Wonderful piece Patricia xomo :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/19/2017 3:01:00 PM

...meant to say and the ADD afflicted, but I forgot lol

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/19/2017 3:00:00 PM

A pleasure. For the word smith, less is more.

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/19/2017 11:02:00 AM

I like those short poems too. Get in and get out say what you have to say stripped down. Thanks for reading my work.