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Safe Harbor Discovery

Written: October 22, 2023 ___________________________________ In the murky backdrop of my remote dreams. Still has the enticing taste of your whisper. To fester in my skeleton till tomorrow. Storing long-dormant slaked thirst till tomorrow. I'll wander quiet pastures in crystal dreams. What relics, amid the dwindling whispers. Esoteric pulse in veins, leading to a whisper. Time is ethereal, and it inveigles tomorrow. My fatuous soul implies in my dreams. Dreams webbed by whispers descry solace tomorrow.
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Rodrigues Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 8:33 AM
Uttering you didn’t love me, it was there you stood… What relics, amid the dwindling whispers
Canerdy Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 8:31 AM
Excellent job with this form~~especially the last line, which serves as an expressive summary statement. Janice
Volumes Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 4:52 PM
Perfect. Such a lovely story runs through this beautifully written Ttritina. Staying true to the form you have written a poem that doesn't show the slightest hint of being restricted by this unusual form dear friend. This is definitely deserving of of 1st place win. Well done. I will be back to read all your poems early in November.
Dietrich Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 4:22 PM
Wow. An amazing job here
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