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Written: October 22, 2023 ___________________________________ In the murky backdrop of my remote dreams. Still has the enticing taste of your whisper. To fester in my skeleton till tomorrow. Storing long-dormant slaked thirst till tomorrow. I'll wander quiet pastures in crystal dreams. What relics, amid the dwindling whispers. Esoteric pulse in veins, leading to a whisper. Time is ethereal, and it inveigles tomorrow. My fatuous soul implies in my dreams. Dreams webbed by whispers descry solace tomorrow.

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Date: 10/24/2023 8:33:00 AM
Uttering you didn’t love me, it was there you stood… What relics, amid the dwindling whispers
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Date: 10/23/2023 8:31:00 AM
Excellent job with this form~~especially the last line, which serves as an expressive summary statement. Janice
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Date: 10/22/2023 4:52:00 PM
Perfect. Such a lovely story runs through this beautifully written Ttritina. Staying true to the form you have written a poem that doesn't show the slightest hint of being restricted by this unusual form dear friend. This is definitely deserving of of 1st place win. Well done. I will be back to read all your poems early in November.
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Date: 10/22/2023 4:22:00 PM
Wow. An amazing job here
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