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Safe From the World

Her dream of falcon, flamingo and furious things Persuaded a parade of ideas indicating bird sings A prancing parakeet provides a penguin’s sweet play A clock in the shadows give her more reason to stay Inside a dream where she is safe from the world Ideas are tucked in close, until later unfurled.

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Date: 4/4/2022 9:57:00 PM
Staying inside a beautiful dream.... ! But she seems far away from the realities of life !
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/5/2022 3:24:00 AM
I live there sometimes, and gladly.
Date: 4/4/2022 5:52:00 PM
Very sweet, even if the girl clearly needs help. ~ I'm from the Government, and I can help... lol. ~ Gershon
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/5/2022 3:24:00 AM
Hahaha Sure. I want the GOVERNMENT to help!
Date: 4/4/2022 3:52:00 PM
Beautiful, Caren.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/5/2022 3:24:00 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 4/4/2022 8:52:00 AM
Ah, sometimes I'd love to stay inside a dream, too, Caren. They can be so pleasant.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/5/2022 3:25:00 AM
They can be miracle workers Hank!

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