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Sadness Swallows Me

Sadness swallows me
Darkness follows me
Light reflects me
People dissect me
Through my emotions
Drowning in the ocean

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John Loving Iii

December 16, 2009 at 11:44 AM

nice rhyming. jhl

Mony Reyna

December 16, 2009 at 1:50 AM

why every heartaches hurt? it's more affected to our mind then when we are happy. love this write. peace.

James Fraser

December 15, 2009 at 12:51 PM

Many congratulations on your poetry being featured on the Soup this week >> James

Anthony Nutter

December 15, 2009 at 2:32 AM

Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A well deserving honor. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit

December 14, 2009 at 5:49 PM

Powerful message captured in concise form. The emotion comes through your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen