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Sadness Is a Vapor

sadness is a vapor, engulfing me with a mist in which I inhale melancholy thoughts refusing to leave until tears streak down my face joining sobs in unison, lasting for a while until the sadness is satiated

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Heidi Sands

Date: 1/30/2018 12:49:00 PM

Very well expressed. Congratulations Sonia :)

Sonia Walker
Date: 1/30/2018 1:34:00 PM

Heidi, your kind words are truly appreciated. Thanks again for your encouragement. ~ Sonia

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/29/2018 6:26:00 PM

So much emotion expressed in so few words, Sonia. Congratulations on your podium win for this lovely poem. Sandra

Sonia Walker
Date: 1/29/2018 8:04:00 PM

Sandra, my toes are tingling. Thank you for your encouragement. ~ Sonia

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/29/2018 2:12:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Sonia. Well done.

Sonia Walker
Date: 1/29/2018 6:08:00 PM

Line, thank you for your positive reply. ~ Sonia

John Lawless

Date: 1/29/2018 8:03:00 AM

Sonia......the title alone---had me at "pause---reflect----read on... Congrats on your placement in the contest.

Sonia Walker
Date: 1/29/2018 9:25:00 AM

John, thank you for your thoughtful reply on my poem, 'Sadness is a Vapor.' Have a great week. ~ Sonia

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/28/2018 9:09:00 PM

Tears in time tend to wash away sadness! Congrats!

Sonia Walker
Date: 1/28/2018 9:15:00 PM

Kim, thank you for your congratulations. ~ Sonia

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/8/2017 6:51:00 PM

Excellent expression and writing Sonia. :)

Sonia Walker
Date: 8/8/2017 7:58:00 PM

Heidi, you are so encouraging to our family of poets. Thank you.