Sadness

sadness reaches here, yet some, and i feel the hurt right here, the string of fate , cut early or late, but Gods work is done, and life says hurry up wait, cos its only just begun.... Don
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Rutherford Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 8:07 AM
Philosophical look at life Don. Good Poem makes one think.Anne
Pettit Avatar
January 21, 2014 at 6:10 PM
A deep description of that ubiquitous human feeling in relatively few words.
A  Avatar
January 21, 2014 at 5:19 PM
Don, why so sad... God, has a funny way in selling us this world. A good poem and topic.... SKAT
Johnson Avatar
January 21, 2014 at 7:17 PM
other peoples sorrow per poetry affects us just a little xox
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