Sadness

Sleep eludes the night
Eyes long closed but mind still toils
Head spinning with anxious thoughts

Sadness creeping still
A constant nag through and through
Tears let loose the void inside


9 May 2019
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Dietrich Avatar
June 11, 2019 at 3:23 PM
wow,the last line was so perfect for concluding this poignant poem. congrats on your win.
Gonzales Avatar
June 11, 2019 at 9:11 PM
Wow, thank you so much Andrea! I really appreciate your visit and feedback. Best regards :)
Andresen Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 1:48 PM
- Congratulations on your touching and great winning poem, Elaine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gonzales Avatar
June 11, 2019 at 8:36 PM
Thank you Anne-Lisse! Much appreciated. Regards :)
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