Sadly Chronic Pain

Pretty
Sadly
Needy
Pushy

Limping slowly pretty sadly shy
Anger rises needy pushy pain.

Contest: tyburn sponsored by Dr. Ram
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Ratcliffe Avatar
September 10, 2011 at 10:02 AM
very clever piece of poetry x
Horne Avatar
August 26, 2011 at 4:43 PM
Many congrats on your wins, Doris : )
Brown Avatar
August 26, 2011 at 8:15 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Tyburn" contest Doris. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 11:06 PM
Congrats Doris on your winning poem in Tyburn contest.. luv your word choices ..hope u guys are all safe with hurricane coming..
Freeman Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 10:15 PM
Nice idea Doris,Quite neat, a worthy poem. Congratulations on your worthy poem's win. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 6:15 PM
Congratulations on the win in my contest,Doris
Sweetheart Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 7:18 PM
yes dealing with pain is a pain Doris.. luv your choice of words for the contest..good luck luv..
Neels Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 4:15 PM
A great entry for Dr. Ram's contest Doris, the best of luck to you ;) enjoy the weekend ahead!! Wilma
Foulk Avatar
August 18, 2011 at 9:17 PM
very creative Tyburn, enjoyed it. thank you for commenting on Harrison's Five and Dime.
Mehta Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 8:26 PM
Thanks for the entry, Doris
Devonshire Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 6:02 PM
Very good tyburn, Doris. People who have chronic pain will surely relate to this one. Best wishes in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, carolyn
Kearley Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 2:58 PM
One word says it all.So simple.
Kearley Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 5:29 PM
lol..Now I understand what you were doing.
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