Saddened Squirrel

Saddened Squirrel


she writes
like her wings
are dipped 
in purgatory
hot water
and she is grounded
and broken
because of him
him, him, him
to her
how, how, how
he's met
every overture
every response
with bit lips
and olive branches
yet, yet, yet
she seems to think
like 
he's the enemy
where he
would give anything
to be her
friend, friend, friend
you've heard this before
this isn't foreign
mater of fact
your wings are dipped
in angel's dust
you soar way higher 
than others and him
don't you see that?
yet
for lack of rationalizing
you rather beat 
around the bush
resort to innuendos
and subtleties 
and angel zaps
did I say anything 
about your sharp teeth?
You say he's driving
you crazy,
lying, lying, lying
you're depressed
you can't sleep
girlfriend
you're the creator
of your own
misery
can't you see that?
I do
I say
reach a resolution
I've tried
you can't be 
going on 
like this
not unless you're
playing

connie pachecho

4/28/17

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 5/12/2017 6:49:00 PM
Tell her to dump him. Cheers, Connie. : )
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Date: 5/5/2017 8:10:00 AM
Connie...am feeling your artistic drift...yes, good poetry can impart meaning with subtle tools...as you display! Nice...jim
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