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Sad To Die Alone - Than-Bauk

Lived on her own
dear sweet Joan, was
not known to moan

One day felt weak
bones did creak, Joan
so meek and mild

Joan fell at home
broke her bone - died
as lone soul soared


27 January 2019

Contest: Any Theme Than Bauk Poetry
Sponsor: Charles Messina
1st place

Contest Brian's Select A
Sponsor Brian Strand

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Jan Allison Date: 2/13/2019 2:58:00 PM very well penned Ann many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Ann Gilmour Date: 2/14/2019 12:31:00 AM Thank you so much Jan for your lovely comments. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Alexis Y. Date: 2/11/2019 11:34:00 AM Hi Ann, You did a great job with contest theme. To die alone would be just heartbreaking. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis Login to Reply Ann Gilmour Date: 2/14/2019 12:30:00 AM Thank you so much Alexis for your lovely comments and so good to hear from you. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/11/2019 9:12:00 AM Congratulations on your vivid write! Login to Reply Ann Gilmour Date: 2/14/2019 12:15:00 AM Many thanks Kim for your kind comments, kindest thoughts Ann xx

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 2/11/2019 5:56:00 AM Ann, your lovely Than Bauk reminds me of a dear friend who died at home. I never learned the cause, but suspect she was suffering from a broken heart. Congratulations on your first-place win in Charlie's contest. Hugs, Carolyn Login to Reply Ann Gilmour Date: 2/14/2019 12:14:00 AM Such a sad tale Carolyn. Thank you so much for your congrats and hugs, kindest thoughts Ann xx

Charles Messina Date: 2/10/2019 9:40:00 PM This one touched me Ann. So sad for anyone to die alone. Well done and congratulations on your 1st place win... Charlie Login to Reply Ann Gilmour Date: 2/11/2019 12:32:00 AM Thank you so much Charlie for my wonderful 1st place win! Kindest thoughts Ann xx

James Horn Date: 2/1/2019 6:13:00 AM Death and dying all have agreed; About it does seem so sad to read; Where I go, Tears will flow; God her to heaven be sure to lead. Login to Reply Ann Gilmour Date: 2/1/2019 9:36:00 AM Many thanks for your visit and comments James. Kindest thoughts Ann

P.S. Awtry Date: 1/31/2019 8:12:00 PM Nicely done. Per your comment below, yes it is hard and you made it look easy :) Login to Reply Ann Gilmour Date: 2/1/2019 9:37:00 AM Thanks so much for your comments PS and as you can see I did add two more stanzas. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Caren Krutsinger Date: 1/27/2019 1:47:00 PM Nicely done Than Bauk; Charles always has such terrific contest ideas! Good luck Ann. Login to Reply Ann Gilmour Date: 1/27/2019 2:26:00 PM Many thanks Caren, though I may still add a couple more stanzas, not sure yet. This is so hard to do, but I enjoy a challenge, haha. Thanks for your nice comments and good luck wishes. Kindest thoughts Ann xx