Kim Rodrigues Poet Alexandrine

Sad Tale of the Bird and Bee

The blush and bloom of bride; the doom and grunt of groom.
The carelessness of bee - too bad he’s in his room.
Too bad for bird as well; weight is unbearable.
Too late he longs her love; would make pain bearable.
She nurses him in day; escapes from him at night.
He sees her take off ring - at last she saw the light.

3/22/2023

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Clifford Villalon March 22, 2023 at 7:36 PM Sadness turns into laughter with your humor Miss Kim! You are always positive in many ways. Thanks for sharing. :) Cliff Kim Rodrigues March 22, 2023 at 8:12 PM Thank you, Cliff :)

Gershon Wolf March 22, 2023 at 6:38 PM Nice twist on the plural of the topic, Kim! ~ Lion and Tiger and Bear Kim Rodrigues March 22, 2023 at 8:13 PM Thank you :)

Daniel Turner March 22, 2023 at 11:48 AM She must have been a crow. They're supposed to be pretty smart, right? LOL I really like your quirky sense of humor, Kim. Lazy bees don't get no honey:) Thanks for the smile. Kim Rodrigues March 22, 2023 at 1:05 PM LOL! Thank you, Daniel!