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Sad Tale of the Bird and Bee

The blush and bloom of bride; the doom and grunt of groom. The carelessness of bee - too bad he’s in his room. Too bad for bird as well; weight is unbearable. Too late he longs her love; would make pain bearable. She nurses him in day; escapes from him at night. He sees her take off ring - at last she saw the light. 3/22/2023

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Date: 3/22/2023 7:36:00 PM
Sadness turns into laughter with your humor Miss Kim! You are always positive in many ways. Thanks for sharing. :) Cliff
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/22/2023 8:12:00 PM
Thank you, Cliff :)
Date: 3/22/2023 6:38:00 PM
Nice twist on the plural of the topic, Kim! ~ Lion and Tiger and Bear
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/22/2023 8:13:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 3/22/2023 11:48:00 AM
She must have been a crow. They're supposed to be pretty smart, right? LOL I really like your quirky sense of humor, Kim. Lazy bees don't get no honey:) Thanks for the smile.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/22/2023 1:05:00 PM
LOL! Thank you, Daniel!

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