Sad Seeker

Insidious foul mist
She creeps through lives
Quietly mourning her faults
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 1:41 PM
Beautifully worded haiku with lovely message, Renee
Kelly Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 9:51 AM
Thank you!
Devonshire Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 1:27 PM
Renee, I hope you are not describing something in recent personal experience here, but I sure can relate to it. Incredible write! Love, Carolyn
Kelly Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 9:51 AM
Thanks, Carolyn! It was actually something just milling around in my head recently. No real rhyme or reason for it.
Sweetheart Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 7:50 AM
deep and reflective write Renee.. thought provoking lines luv..
Kelly Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 8:02 AM
Thank you, Linda!
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