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Sad Seeker

Insidious foul mist She creeps through lives Quietly mourning her faults

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/21/2011 1:41:00 PM
Beautifully worded haiku with lovely message, Renee
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Renee Kelly
Date: 6/22/2011 9:51:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 6/21/2011 1:27:00 PM
Renee, I hope you are not describing something in recent personal experience here, but I sure can relate to it. Incredible write! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/22/2011 9:51:00 AM
Thanks, Carolyn! It was actually something just milling around in my head recently. No real rhyme or reason for it.
Date: 6/21/2011 7:50:00 AM
deep and reflective write Renee.. thought provoking lines luv..
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Renee Kelly
Date: 6/21/2011 8:02:00 AM
Thank you, Linda!

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