Sad One Liner

At the gravesite my sister said a final good-bye to her 15 1/2 year old beloved child who committed suicide...



10-11-16

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Date: 10/13/2016 11:49:00 AM
Cheryl...(tears tears tears) My sister took her life 12-31-10 and I still haven't healed. I never will either. I am so sorry for your loss. I swear my pain is far worse than her pain when she was alive. When she died I adopted her dog, and Monday I just put him to rest. I am in so much pain today. He was the last tangible thing I had connected to my sister. I am sorry you feel this way, I really understand...congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 10/13/2016 7:03:00 PM
So sad when a person commits suicide not realizing the atmosphere of sadness, bewilderment and despair they have created after they're gone. So, So sorry for you loss Luloo! Thank you so much; you are very kind~Hugs~Che
Date: 10/12/2016 11:28:00 AM
The absolute saddest one I've read Cheryl...
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 10/12/2016 7:06:00 PM
Thank you so much Charlie!:) This poem is about my nephew who committed suicide on 6-14-2000…dedicated to my older sister Patti.
Date: 10/12/2016 11:18:00 AM
- Congratulations on your 3rd place in the contest, Cheryl - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 10/12/2016 7:06:00 PM
Thank you so much Sunshine!:)
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 10/12/2016 7:05:00 PM
Thank you so much Sunshine!:)
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