Sad News

when you hear news so sad to say out loud
too painful to speak of
your mind wants to shut down
to stop, to just stop
as you try to think of something else
anything else
happy thoughts
better times
the sadness pushes through 
like a knife 
piercing your heart
the ache consumes you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/12/2014 11:50:00 AM
i like how the positive touch of this piece... it's good to think of happy thoughts when sad news floods our day, well done, netty.. huggs
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Date: 11/11/2014 3:32:00 PM
Very emotive and expressive work..Good job of the feelings being written down..I hope nothing in your life that has made you sad..Sara
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Date: 11/11/2014 1:43:00 PM
my heart goes out to you Betty - my thoughts are with you:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/11/2014 1:06:00 PM
Oh, Betty, my heart goes out to you. Sad news does turn your whole being inside out and time and prayer is the only thing that eases the pain. :) God bless, love and hugs eve
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Betty Bateson
Date: 11/11/2014 2:26:00 PM
Thank you. Bad news about a good friend. Life is full of surprises and not all surprises are good.
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