Sad News

My friend’s father died today
No idea, what to say
I imagine what she feels
Through her words, this man is real

‘My Da passed away this morning……………….’
My thoughts are sitting with her, mourning………………: (
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Eastman Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 9:21 AM
Touching write...
Munro Avatar
January 22, 2012 at 8:10 AM
Beautiful free verse. No matter how many wakes I go to, I still never know what to say. "I'm sorry for your loss" seems such a cliche. Keep writing!
Andresen Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 5:28 AM
Bless him !!!And bless you,David - OXOX love from me to you.
Flach Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 11:53 PM
I can empathize - I lost my father this past year, also. Doesn't matter how old you are or how old they are - a parent's passing requires friends to help you get by. Nice write, David.
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