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Sad Love

She came crying In no season Me asking For what reason. No answer, only sob A finger pointing on her heart I suspect it's all about love As I sense it from the start. Oh, my daughter is in love As I hear some romantic phone call I see her glowing stare from above Unmindful a glass of water already full. The happiness is short-live As she open up her grief The love she give Has betrayed by a thief. She later found out sought The boy she commit Is already betroth Agreed to better quit. I pity my daughter For such an early failure But I never discourage her For that lovely error. For a moment, I gave her a glance And tap her back a shove Advice her to give her heart a chance To never give up on love.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/3/2024 4:07:00 PM

Hello Hugo, This is good advice for your daughter. never give on love. that goes for everyone wanting to find their soulmate. Much love, /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/5/2024 7:58:00 AM

When I think of it , I am a pet parent to my cat. She is a rescues. She has been with me for 2 years and 7 months. Do you have a pet? Much love /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/4/2024 4:46:00 PM

Hello Hugo, I never had children. i married late in life. I am a widow. I am also an aunt, great aunt. and as godmother. I have two nieces, Two great nieces, and three great nephews. Love lots of love here. /,Darlene/

Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 9/4/2024 11:34:00 AM

Thank you, Darlene. We both parents and we know what heartbroken means. Our children are not our children, they are the children of the universe. We cant dictate the course of our children's life. We parent just give advice, guidance and motivating words of comfort and giving them unconditional love. Thanks, Darlene. Love lots here./Hugo.