Sad In California
Sitting here on lovely sand
Feeling like I'm drowning
Staring off into the blue
To my left is the pale moon
suffocating in the blue
of the sky
To my right the surfer rests
Towel draped around his
pelvis
He's old and ugly
Sitting here and thinking how
I'd rather be at the hotel
Let it be known that, yes,
It is possible to be sad
In California
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