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Sad In California

Sitting here on lovely sand Feeling like I'm drowning Staring off into the blue To my left is the pale moon suffocating in the blue of the sky To my right the surfer rests Towel draped around his pelvis He's old and ugly Sitting here and thinking how I'd rather be at the hotel Let it be known that, yes, It is possible to be sad In California

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/17/2014 10:36:00 PM
Well even though sad, I loved this poem, one can feel the emotion in it! Great write!
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