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sad halloween

the day after Halloween on a cheap holiday break i will never forget they found your body two tourists found face down in the water the dreaded call i got at work saying they found your brother god i thought let it be anyone else but it was true we had so much more to do looking off into the distance i will always remember you as laughter filled rooms a large part of life not believing the truth we wanted him home three weeks later his body arrived our hearts were ripped in two from the wake to gods house brothers with father linking arms with my father at the head of the coffin i am the oldest son looking into his eyes saw so much hurt wailing in agony feeling so much pain hurting inside looking at my fathers face tearing the heart asunder knowing in carrying you i was saying goodbye my little friend we have played our last games together you have gone before me to that light at the end spirits in the sky brother i miss you hope one day we meet again at heavens gate together we will share our little stories again god bless you shaun

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Date: 10/29/2013 11:17:00 PM
Very sad and deeply touching, I can definitely feel your pain in this poem. I am sure that your brother is looking down on you now, and he is smiling with a proud heart. A beautifully written poem, Liam!...Thank you very much, my friend, for your kind comments, as always! :)
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Date: 10/25/2013 11:11:00 PM
Sorry for the loss of your brother. I too lost a sister in the month of October. She was found two days later. it is a sad thing, but at least they are in a better place. I am sure that he watches over you from above.... Lucilla
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Date: 10/25/2013 4:50:00 PM
Happiness i meant below oiops
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Date: 10/25/2013 4:48:00 PM
Because i know from where these thoughts are coming ..I can feel part of your pain..a small part of it and it kills me..It fills my eyes with tears..For a moment it saddens my heart..but knowing that through soul our loved ones remain with us bring comfort to the heart.A tragic happening yet cause We are believers..We know there is not such death..Just a passing over to eternal happness.
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Date: 10/25/2013 10:31:00 AM
gloomy, but good... SKAT
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