Sad Dizain

NIGHT OF HUNGER

In broken words she sang him lullaby, 
 And tried to comfort him but he still cried,
  He could not sleep with wet eyes and lips dry, 
   New night of hunger, for them had arrived,
    And she no more could hide her tears and wiped,
     Fate left her wander in deserted street,
      Troubled by hunger and tortured by heat,
       Homeless she was, after her husband's death,
        She smiled, held her child close to her heartbeat,
         While both counted stars, waited for last breath.



May 16, 2016.
Sad Poem-Dizain - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Laura Loo
Ten lines of 10 syllables each line rhyme scheme: A-B-A-B-B-C-C-D-C-D
Total# of words 82
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A  Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 1:43 AM
Meenakshi...awesome win. Skat
Daniel Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 2:43 AM
I'm glad this won:) Congratulations on top spot:)
Misra Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 12:41 AM
Congrats, Meenakshi, on your win. Sad but true picture. ~karam~
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 4:06 PM
More than sad. Congratulations!
Ficklin Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 3:15 PM
Nicely written... So sad to think of a mother and child so young in so much desperation... I know it's out there too. Congrats on your placement.
Haight Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 3:11 PM
Oh, so very sad, Meenakshi, but so beautifully composed in the Dizain form. Congratulations on your First Place win! 7, Hugs, Sandra
Davey Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 2:53 PM
Very beautifully penned Meenakshi and congrats on your wonderful win!
Scars Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 1:20 PM
Meenakshi, a lovely poem, thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your top placement! -luloo :)
Daniel Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 1:54 AM
Extremely sad. Beautifully painted with your loving words:)
Raina Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 11:23 AM
Thanks Jo...
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