The poem “Sad Discharge” is the result of considering how worlds of dreams are manifested, and the inevitable outcome.
When a world dreams the next three small wishes become one each with the knowledge of the last until the natal is surpassed a first asks for a new day demands existence to coalesce against the tides of ignorance combined with fears few admit the second grasps rainbow tears puts to sleep the tendencies to look behind when progress asks forward movement at long last a final third belies the rest for the progress thus attained when the curtain falls to ground the new is old in sad discharge.
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