Sad

Before I wondered what hurt felt like, the sensation of being alone, 
Apprehensively snatching up the phone
At every chance, at every whisper, at every mention of your name,
Though now I realize, you never felt the same
My emotions have folded, glass tears in my eye,
As I remember our fantastic love and each and every lie 
You told with ease, admitted so candid,
Though instead, my emotions so rancid
 So harshly expressed in whole,
Though slowly they will begin to thaw and quite the same for my soul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Twistedthought Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 6:14 PM
Hey Victoria! Absolutely love your poem, hehehe. It's great! If you focus that energy elsewhere or into a cheerier poem, i'll bet that will be even greater and make you feel better too! Teeeeeaaach me your way of the peeeen. A definite 8/7!
C.C. Avatar
May 13, 2015 at 10:19 PM
I have felt like this. I def related to your feelings.
A  Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 10:54 AM
Victoria :) Congratulations on having your poem featured this Mothers Day. SKAT love
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April 26, 2015 at 10:26 PM
Victoria, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Rucker Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 2:35 PM
Thank you so much for welcoming me to Poetry Soup! I look forward to exposing myself to many different types of poetry and making many new friends! Also I think it'd be fantastic to be friends with someone as kind as you! Ciao and happy writing, Victoria
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April 26, 2015 at 2:20 PM
This cuts deep Victoria, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
Rucker Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 2:30 PM
Thank you so much for the warm welcome! It really means a lot! I'll be at ease to post many more poems after reading your kind comment.:) Victoria
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