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Sacrifice

Sacrifice Giving one For the other Hoping life Will be less Bumpy as Now it’s bad That’s the way It is at times Brokenhearted And inferior Wanting life To be easier Than it is At the moment Hold me now Give me comfort Maybe I’ll Make it through The dark night Maybe I’ll Sacrifice Everything needed To continue Russell Sivey

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Judy Ball

Date: 9/3/2011 12:11:00 PM

A fine write my friend with lots of emotion but it has a defeated quality to it. I found out the only strength I could depend on was in Jesus. He's the only one who knows all there is to know about me and loves me anyhow. Of course, if you're just waxing poetic it's great stuff. God Bless, :) JB

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/2/2011 3:30:00 AM

an emotional rant packed with words of wisdom and skillfully crafted phrasing.. nice, rissel! :)huggs, nette

Nette Onclaud
Date: 9/2/2011 3:31:00 AM

*russel*