Timothy Mcguire Poet Free verse

Sacrifice

Shouts in the temple, the curtain is torn in two
The elders and priests now know what is true
Just as I heard the centurion say
“This truly was a Holy man we killed today"

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Connie Marcum Wong July 21, 2019 at 1:51 AM Wow....a meaningful and moving poem Tim. I hope to see this high on the winner's list! : ) Timothy Mcguire July 21, 2019 at 4:56 AM Thank you Connie

Line Gauthier July 20, 2019 at 8:58 PM Powerful lines, Timothy. Well done. Timothy Mcguire July 21, 2019 at 4:57 AM Thank you Line

Richard Lamoureux July 19, 2019 at 9:29 AM Artfully expressed. I like starting my day with good news! Timothy Mcguire July 19, 2019 at 10:36 AM Thanks Richard, check out the full poem "They're killing some guy"