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Shouts in the temple, the curtain is torn in two The elders and priests now know what is true Just as I heard the centurion say “This truly was a Holy man we killed today" Arbitrium Divisa 3 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Gregory R. Barden 7/18/19 Rising of the Son Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke 4/6/19

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Date: 7/21/2019 1:51:00 AM
Wow....a meaningful and moving poem Tim. I hope to see this high on the winner's list! : )
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 7/21/2019 4:56:00 AM
Thank you Connie
Date: 7/20/2019 8:58:00 PM
Powerful lines, Timothy. Well done.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 7/21/2019 4:57:00 AM
Thank you Line
Date: 7/19/2019 9:29:00 AM
Artfully expressed. I like starting my day with good news!
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 7/19/2019 10:36:00 AM
Thanks Richard, check out the full poem "They're killing some guy"

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