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Michelle Faulkner

Sacrifice

Surrendering frost
Frees spring from the ice
Daybreak sees what shadows lost
Flower-colored footpaths
Crystal thawing birdbaths
Winter's sacrifice

3/30/18

Copyright © Michelle Faulkner | Year Posted 2018

natureseasonsspringwinterrhyme

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April 3, 2018 at 5:10 PM

Vivid awesomeness Michelle!

April 6, 2018 at 8:11 PM

Lol well it's flipping good!

Michelle Faulkner

April 6, 2018 at 8:41 AM

Wow two comments on one poem from you, so flattered!

April 3, 2018 at 3:52 PM

Such a creative write! Such an ingenious way of viewing winter's departure. :) gw

Michelle Faulkner

April 3, 2018 at 4:16 PM

Hope winter frees spring for you soon, gw - your comments always put a smile on my face!

April 3, 2018 at 9:35 AM

Well done, as crisp as the departing winter and as flash packed as spring. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Michelle Faulkner

April 3, 2018 at 12:48 PM

Thanks for your visit and comment, CayCay (great name btw!)

March 30, 2018 at 7:51 PM

Michelle your take on that chosen theme is beautiful!

Michelle Faulkner

April 1, 2018 at 8:44 AM

so appreciate that, thank you!

March 30, 2018 at 2:54 PM

Very nice Michelle. I love this. A favorite :)

Michelle Faulkner

March 30, 2018 at 2:58 PM

Thank you, so glad for your kind words-

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