Home » Poems » Michelle Faulkner » Sacrifice

Sacrifice

Surrendering frost Frees spring from the ice Daybreak sees what shadows lost Flower-colored footpaths Crystal thawing birdbaths Winter's sacrifice 3/30/18

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Fj Thomas

Date: 4/3/2018 5:10:00 PM

Vivid awesomeness Michelle!

Fj Thomas
Date: 4/6/2018 8:11:00 PM

Lol well it's flipping good!

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/6/2018 8:41:00 AM

Wow two comments on one poem from you, so flattered!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/3/2018 3:52:00 PM

Such a creative write! Such an ingenious way of viewing winter's departure. :) gw

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/3/2018 4:16:00 PM

Hope winter frees spring for you soon, gw - your comments always put a smile on my face!

Caycay Jennings

Date: 4/3/2018 9:35:00 AM

Well done, as crisp as the departing winter and as flash packed as spring. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/3/2018 12:48:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and comment, CayCay (great name btw!)

Fj Thomas

Date: 3/30/2018 7:51:00 PM

Michelle your take on that chosen theme is beautiful!

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/1/2018 8:44:00 AM

so appreciate that, thank you!

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/30/2018 2:54:00 PM

Very nice Michelle. I love this. A favorite :)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/30/2018 2:58:00 PM

Thank you, so glad for your kind words-