Sacred Man

See the creation of the Sacred man , Who made everything and everyone . He loves what he created , Like a painting wonderfully painted. He created love , Like a white-skinned dove . He is so powerful , He made the world wonderful . Oh ! Sacred man , Oh ! Sacred man , Embrace me with your clean , clean hands . Touch me and accept my apologize , Before it's the end of time .

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Beata Agustin

Date: 12/14/2024 9:18:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/21/2016 10:26:00 PM

Neil, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/15/2016 7:34:00 PM

YOUR POEM IS AWESOME..........SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/28/2012 3:07:00 AM

Very well written neil, I like it. - oxox Anne-Lise