Sacred

Sacred is, what sacred does
Do not challenge, do not fuzz
Inner peace is all I need
Rid my human world of greed?

“Greed is good”, I heard it said
Makes me rich and keep ahead
Sacred is this concept now
So to worship, here I bow

Greedy is, what greedy does
Do not challenge, do not fuzz
Inner peace is all I need
Rid me of my sin indeed?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Galua Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 4:43 AM
wow deep and puzzling...I love it....goes to my favs...^_^ v
Dabomb™ Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 6:40 PM
Nice form on a deep message; much enjoyed:)
Devonshire Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 5:38 PM
People consumed by greed never do find that "inner peace" as they are always wanting more, David. What great wisdom you share in this poem! Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 12:30 PM
Simply from the depths of your soul David and the words pour out to comfort too ... time to move on ..change is good and works wonders.. an enjoyable piece.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Neels Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 3:35 AM
great message David - rgds WN
Bloomsfield Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 12:19 AM
Great great message here.. Celene...
Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 12:12 AM
yes, interesting one, David. Too much greed in our world, and sacredness is being destroyed. LUv, Andrea
Delacroix Avatar
June 17, 2010 at 11:53 PM
Interesting, David. Well done. You have soup mail.
A   Avatar
June 17, 2010 at 7:49 PM
rid of greed, good one, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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