Sacred

Each time you cry out 
I hold you tighter
bringing you down
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 14, 2010 at 11:20 PM
bringing you down? Hm, i don't quite get the end line. when he crys out, does he ever stop by your embrace the warmth-Always&Forever Lynette
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