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Something to say about these Haiku. This is a near place where I live. People grow wine here, the most. But also fruit and vegetables. It's popular all over the world. It's next to the river and the area is called in gallego (another language in Spain): "RIVEIRA SACRA" what it means. SACRED RIVERSIDE. This area has lots of visitors because of its beauty. But as a working land for picking the grapes is very hard and dangerous, because of the conditions of the vineyards. People have to carry up the hills the grapes on their shoulders and it's really hard work. But the wine is very appreciated, crossing many frontiers. This is also our pride because after hundred of years of work, now we are having a recognition and I had to write it down.

 

Harsh area to grow up charming views for waking up along sacred land. Exposed to chances fed by honorable pride to conquer our sense. Sacred riverside full of vineyards, hills to climb to taste the best ones. Red, white or rosé served to the sacred spirits to relish in a glass. Constance La France Writing Challenge - 'S' Words, Poetry Contest 04/09/2023

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Date: 4/13/2023 5:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Contest...Maria.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/13/2023 7:46:00 AM
Thank you so much Alfonso. Have a nice day
Date: 4/12/2023 10:33:00 AM
- Congratulations ... love the second haiku, Maria :) - hugs
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/12/2023 12:15:00 PM
Good evening Sunshine and thank you so much. Nice you love it.. Hugs
Date: 4/12/2023 10:33:00 AM
Marie, thank you so much for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge !
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/12/2023 12:15:00 PM
Good evening. Thank you. My greetings
Date: 4/9/2023 5:13:00 PM
wonderful haikus , to drink with with moderation, such a brilliant penning, i could taste the wine, indeed, thanks a lot
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/9/2023 5:52:00 PM
Hi Yann. Thank you. It s not about drinking. It s about the land where the drinking comes from, the hard work and all that. Good night yann

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