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Sabotaged by Chateau Charlene

Chateau Charlene pulled out all the pins today Trying to watch Cheeky Wall fall. Cheeky Wall has had too much experience Showing the world her sassy, funny, hilarious side Keeping our true feelings inside As deep down as possible Emotions are seething from Cheeky Wall Into the grounds of Chateau Charlene right now Like snakes, they slither toward her foundation, Trying to crack it, reveal her secrets. These two are in a magnificent love-hate relationship. Each trying to sabotage And take down the other When the kingdom falls Will the truth be revealed? Person alert. Smile on face? Pretend light in eyes? Happiness showing? Depression and despair in the dungeon gurgles up In a bowl of black snakes and dead pussy willow leaves. I tamp them down So no one knows “Hi!” we say. A bit too brightly. Luckily no one cares or even notices.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 9/3/2019 6:53:00 PM
Some do notice. They are often quiet for the oddest reasons however. I on the other hand am not quiet. Hug! Excellent write. Ann
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/3/2019 9:08:00 PM
Thank you so much Ann.
Date: 9/1/2019 4:28:00 PM
Hi Caren, I love the content of this one, It looks like a love-hate relationship by two inanimate objects. It is a poetic way to look at an old building. Love the visions. Have a wonderful Monday, when it comes. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/1/2019 10:03:00 PM
I love old buildings, and visions. I am going to have an insanely terrific Monday. Have a great Monday yourself my friend!