Sabbath 'round the bend

   Workweek grinds to an end
     Holy Sabbath just around the bend

   Ring up the last sale, turn the key in the door
     Enter a dimension where your spirit can soar
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Elliott Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 8:46 AM
Hi Gershon, I'm so glad Sabbath is such a looked forward to religious event in your week. We worship at home here, we take Communion at the table, etc. Years ago my late husband was a Baptist youth minister for three years. We find worshipping at home and Bible studies at home helps avoid, "church politics" so prevalent in some Christian churches. Anyway, love your writing. Shalom my good friend. ~
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 5:42 PM
Amen! Be blessed, Mr. Wolf!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 10:31 AM
I thought I’d be funny…lol. Just don’t call me Ms. Rodrigues or I will think of you as my school teacher…lol!
Wolf Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 6:21 PM
Mr. Wolf? I am also known as Gershon
Dietrich Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 12:46 PM
This was Sabbath many years ago. Today half the stores are open, but it is sure nice that some give their employees that day off. nice one.
Wolf Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 6:35 PM
I think that you are referring to the Christians' observance of the Sabbath. And of course, you are right... However, Jews observe Friday evening-night and all-day Saturday (into the early evening) as Sabbath, according to the Old Testament. And for those 3.5 million or so Jews in the world who are observant, the Sabbath described in this poem is as true today as it ever was. :) gw
Greenhough Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 9:15 AM
Spiritual happiness takes a little work. Thank you for this uplifting poem.
Wolf Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 7:03 PM
If so, let's keep working! ~ Heavy Lifting
Baker Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 9:25 PM
I like these Couplets, Gershon, Very true words, my friend. By the way, congrats on being part of the new Anthology! Yeah! Have a pleasant weekend! Bill
Wolf Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 7:07 PM
Thank you so much, Bill. Are you part of the New Anthology too?! I hadn't / haven't looked yet. Have a wonderful Sunday, Gershon
Legros Kelley Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 8:45 PM
Nice :)
Wolf Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 7:13 PM
-- like 'sugar and spice?!' Thanks, BJ.
Lawless Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 4:31 PM
would that we could sit outside the window and bath in its peace....nice on Gershon, thanks
Wolf Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 7:19 PM
Thank you so much, John. Peace and Tranquility, gw
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