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Sabatage

try to get it right 
 battlefield of thoughts gone wrong 
 my mind is the fight 

 excrete pools of sweat 
 gasping for life’s very last breath ... 
 dream of death again 

 peaceful slumber nights 
 sabotaged dreams infiltrate 
 awake to take flight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/28/2014 9:01:00 PM
This trio of senryu entries collectively convey vivid images to the minds of any readers.
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Gregory Ramos
Date: 1/28/2014 9:38:00 PM
thank you Robert , I love it when a reader like you and myself can get right into what it is he / she has wrote , please read more

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