Sa Fille Attentive
Translation
~Her Attentive Daughter~
Before winters sun; she awakes.
A nice, warm, shower, is her habit.
In plaid slippers to the kitchen she
then goes.
To prepare breakfast for her family
The dog also begging to be fed.
To see how her convalescing Mother
is doing!
In this California land, touched by the
lightest of God’s earthquakes.
Daughter is attentive to make sure her
Mom takes vitamins and tablets.
Later, they watch choice movie shows.
To her , their love is primary.
Then, after a short walk places her
lovingly in bed.
She realizes, not, it leaves her Mother’s
grateful heart leaping.
Rhyme end scheme as follows in both
stanzas:
a,b,c,d,e,f
12/18/2021
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