Sa Fille Attentive

Translation



               ~Her Attentive Daughter~



Before winters sun; she awakes.
A nice, warm, shower, is her habit.
In plaid slippers to the kitchen she 
then goes.
To prepare breakfast for her family
The dog also begging to be fed.
To see how her convalescing Mother
is doing!

In this California land, touched by the
lightest of God’s earthquakes.
Daughter is attentive to make sure her
Mom takes vitamins and tablets.
Later, they watch choice movie shows.
To her , their love is primary.
Then, after a short walk places her 
lovingly in bed.
She realizes, not, it leaves her Mother’s
grateful heart leaping.



       Rhyme end scheme as follows in both
       stanzas:
       a,b,c,d,e,f 


                             12/18/2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 12/20/2021 12:15:00 AM
God sent an angel to look after you, beautiful tribute poem. Tom
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/20/2021 2:51:00 AM
He sure did, Tom....i dont know if all daughters can be this caring. DOUBTFUL, PANGIE XO
Date: 12/18/2021 12:20:00 PM
Beautiful poem of love and compassion, Pangie. Stanzas rhymed well. Could have been titled "A Thoughtful Day". Thanks for sharing my friend, Bill
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/18/2021 1:03:00 PM
Sincerely appreciate concrete advice, Bill. My daughter is truy a great caregiver. I walked 30 steps on my own today, with a walker.Could not do that a few days ago unless someone held me. Big jump today. Appreciate youe whokesomeness Panagiota xxoo
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