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arteries clogged, caught in a shadow box like a mime; minding my business is hard. mining out creativity and treasures blocked. can’t breathe, parenthesis only lets out hot air. i can’t let down my hair. pushing against the arms that squeeze. submarine won’t let me rise. bone tired of the lack of motivation. evacuation of energy and nutrition. enemy prowling, scrapping together incorrigible snacks and time restraints. s t i l l, hope’s pump primed. s t i l l, faith on the rise. s t i l l, I’m captivated by my Savior. s t i l l, I survive. ~ ~ ~ We are hard pressed on every side, but not crushed; perplexed, but not in despair; persecuted, but not abandoned; struck down, but not destroyed. We always carry around in our body the death of Jesus, so that the life of Jesus may also be revealed in our body. 2 Corinthian 4:8-10

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Date: 3/28/2024 6:13:00 PM
A beautiful piece, dear Kim. Wishing you all the best, light and love <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/30/2024 7:05:00 AM
Thank you, Paige!
Date: 3/28/2024 5:08:00 PM
This is quite a stirring and powerful write, Kim ... And, it is very encouraging, too ... Very well written!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/30/2024 7:04:00 AM
I appreciate you, Kelly!
Date: 3/26/2024 4:27:00 PM
outstanding take on the Biblical verse. Yes, even though we're often 'hard pressed', s t i l l, hope’s pump primed. s t i l l, faith on the rise. s t i l l, I’m captivated by my Savior. s t i l l, I survive. How inspirational and creative was your poem. It resonated with me. Have a blessed evening, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/26/2024 8:31:00 PM
Blessings yo you, Sara! You are such an encouragement! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 3/26/2024 9:43:00 AM
Your "STILL" is a wonderful write/ending. Have a blessed day..................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/26/2024 2:30:00 PM
Thank you, Paula! When problems trouble us, we turn to the Lord.
Date: 3/26/2024 7:53:00 AM
Excellent poetic take on the verse cited Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/26/2024 8:50:00 AM
Thank you, Tom!

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