S O S

D o u b t
Hasachokehold
 And I am going
                   D
                      O
                          W
                                N
                                   
                       Under.         WaVeS
                                 the
Into the pools of
                  Nothingness




My  MOUNTAIN is now
The rock I hold
His weight...oo
                     oo
                          Oo
                             O
                             Anchors me

I am not sure I can Surface this time
  I barely have EnerGy for
                    one
How do I swim for two
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       So we are STuCK

                               Head
                                   Under
                            ~~~~~~~
                       H 2 O 
For the next  18 m o  n  t   h     s

                           ...   ---   ... 
       

                         This is my S.O.S

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Mario De Paz

Date: 4/25/2015 11:33:00 AM

Playful graphics, appreciable

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/27/2015 11:25:00 AM

Thanks Mario!

Jack Ellison

Date: 4/24/2015 3:34:00 PM

Well look at what you've done... you are a creative genius, my dear Janet! SOS is a masterpiece! HOOHA! Huggsies, Jack xxx

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/24/2015 5:36:00 PM

Yes John told me that Lim'rik Lugs from Nonsense Alley like the visuals. I usually do not play with them and the ability here is limited, but my brain needed distraction. here is the link to the page where it is in full form if you care for a look-see.~Jan http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/JayceeC/1521462/

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/24/2015 9:07:00 AM

- Skilled and creative poem, Janet - I wish you a great weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/24/2015 10:47:00 AM

Thanks Anne Lise..Hoping to have fun. We have a festival and BBQ cookoff this weekend. Just hoping the rain holds. :-) ~Jan

Hannington Mumo

Date: 4/24/2015 8:54:00 AM

I like the ambition of your style. 7+++

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/24/2015 8:57:00 AM

Thanks, the formatting here is not complete, because of the site restrictions for the HTML. But thanks I'm still playing with it a bit so that it looks more like the original here.~janet