Jaycee Cervenka Poet I do not know?

S O S

D o u b t
Hasachokehold
 And I am going
                   D
                      O
                          W
                                N
                                   
                       Under.         WaVeS
                                 the
Into the pools of
                  Nothingness




My  MOUNTAIN is now
The rock I hold
His weight...oo
                     oo
                          Oo
                             O
                             Anchors me

I am not sure I can Surface this time
  I barely have EnerGy for
                    one
How do I swim for two
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       So we are STuCK

                               Head
                                   Under
                            ~~~~~~~
                       H 2 O 
For the next  18 m o  n  t   h     s

                           ...   ---   ... 
       

                         This is my S.O.S

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Mario De Paz April 25, 2015 at 11:33 AM Playful graphics, appreciable Jaycee Cervenka April 27, 2015 at 11:25 AM Thanks Mario!

Jack Ellison April 24, 2015 at 3:34 PM Well look at what you've done... you are a creative genius, my dear Janet! SOS is a masterpiece! HOOHA! Huggsies, Jack xxx Jaycee Cervenka April 24, 2015 at 5:36 PM Yes John told me that Lim'rik Lugs from Nonsense Alley like the visuals. I usually do not play with them and the ability here is limited, but my brain needed distraction. here is the link to the page where it is in full form if you care for a look-see.~Jan http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/JayceeC/1521462/

Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2015 at 9:07 AM - Skilled and creative poem, Janet - I wish you a great weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jaycee Cervenka April 24, 2015 at 10:47 AM Thanks Anne Lise..Hoping to have fun. We have a festival and BBQ cookoff this weekend. Just hoping the rain holds. :-) ~Jan

Hannington Mumo April 24, 2015 at 8:54 AM I like the ambition of your style. 7+++ Jaycee Cervenka April 24, 2015 at 8:57 AM Thanks, the formatting here is not complete, because of the site restrictions for the HTML. But thanks I'm still playing with it a bit so that it looks more like the original here.~janet

Jan Allison April 24, 2015 at 2:15 AM you created a visual delight Janet - so creative - enjoyed:-)Hugs Jan xx Jaycee Cervenka April 24, 2015 at 9:00 AM Hmm cleaned it up again. It does not quite look the same here as it does in my word processor..there are more fonts and size fonts for emphasis