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S O S

D o u b t
Hasachokehold
 And I am going
                   D
                      O
                          W
                                N
                                   
                       Under.         WaVeS
                                 the
Into the pools of
                  Nothingness




My  MOUNTAIN is now
The rock I hold
His weight...oo
                     oo
                          Oo
                             O
                             Anchors me

I am not sure I can Surface this time
  I barely have EnerGy for
                    one
How do I swim for two
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       So we are STuCK

                               Head
                                   Under
                            ~~~~~~~
                       H 2 O 
For the next  18 m o  n  t   h     s

                           ...   ---   ... 
       

                         This is my S.O.S

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Date: 4/25/2015 11:33:00 AM
Playful graphics, appreciable
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/27/2015 11:25:00 AM
Thanks Mario!
Date: 4/24/2015 6:34:00 PM
Ok.. Janet is a poetic and artistic genius! I bow in respect to your greatness!
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/24/2015 8:14:00 PM
Oh please, you will make my head swell and then none of my cowgirl hats will fit (well if I had a hat that is). Thanks Dave, I have decided that people either really love visual poems or the detest them. If you'd like to see the real deal as it was written there is a link in my reply to Jack. Thanks for reading ~Janet
Date: 4/24/2015 3:34:00 PM
Well look at what you've done... you are a creative genius, my dear Janet! SOS is a masterpiece! HOOHA! Huggsies, Jack xxx
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/24/2015 5:36:00 PM
Yes John told me that Lim'rik Lugs from Nonsense Alley like the visuals. I usually do not play with them and the ability here is limited, but my brain needed distraction. here is the link to the page where it is in full form if you care for a look-see.~Jan http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/JayceeC/1521462/
Date: 4/24/2015 9:07:00 AM
- Skilled and creative poem, Janet - I wish you a great weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/24/2015 10:47:00 AM
Thanks Anne Lise..Hoping to have fun. We have a festival and BBQ cookoff this weekend. Just hoping the rain holds. :-) ~Jan
Date: 4/24/2015 8:54:00 AM
I like the ambition of your style. 7+++
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/24/2015 8:57:00 AM
Thanks, the formatting here is not complete, because of the site restrictions for the HTML. But thanks I'm still playing with it a bit so that it looks more like the original here.~janet
Date: 4/24/2015 2:15:00 AM
you created a visual delight Janet - so creative - enjoyed:-)Hugs Jan xx
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/24/2015 9:00:00 AM
Hmm cleaned it up again. It does not quite look the same here as it does in my word processor..there are more fonts and size fonts for emphasis
Date: 4/23/2015 10:39:00 PM
Wow Janet ... Well done , so creative ! Bev :)
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/23/2015 11:15:00 PM
Thanks Bev. Not all of the formatting shows here. Mou tain is graduated to peak...Nothi gness voes to 6pt font....similar things throughout. .grrr, b ut it was fun trying..lol