Notes About The Poem

Rustling

blow, you gentle breeze

sing softly through aspen trees

      rustle golden leaves

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Smith Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 7:20 PM
Beautiful time of year...you captured it well
Dietrich Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 3:48 PM
very lovely!
Lane Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 4:22 PM
Thanks, so much.
Onclaud Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 3:42 PM
i am enticed by this 'ku, lin.. keep it up!..huggs
Lane Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 3:46 PM
Thanks, nette. It's really beautiful when they turn color. Hugs back to ya.
Allison Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 3:37 PM
delightful imagery Lin - wish I could see blue sky like that it is so dull and grey all the time at the moment:-( hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 3:40 PM
Thanks, Jan. Colorado skies are bright blue and hold SO many stars at night.
Lane Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 3:39 PM
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