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Rustic cave

Energized by the rustic cave 
it's cold moist nature calling 
echoes gurgling from within its depth 
dark algae clinging to its walls 
the water slowly trinkling into pools 
shimmering like gold specks 
a delight for any adventurist 
diving into its depth

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Date: 9/22/2024 7:15:00 AM
You brought me into a rich vicarious experience by your creative words my dear poet friend Karen. Thanks for sharing this precious gem and your talent in poetry. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs
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Karen Croft
Date: 9/22/2024 10:48:00 AM
Thank you for reading and sharing in the feeling!

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