Rusted Busted Dusted

Remember December?
Us newly wed.
Setting off on honeymoon in
Thunderbird by Ford.
Eloping abroad.
Down Mexico way.

Being so in love
Under the stars.
Sleeping rough in
Thunderbird by Ford.
Eventually it rusted.
Down Mexico way.

Darling children.
Up and gone.
Still I have you and
Thunderbird by Ford.
Engine almost had it's day
Down Mexico way.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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James Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 10:02 AM
I liked it...good luck!
Murray Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 11:13 AM
Thank you James.
Allison Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 8:21 AM
Great take on the theme Jean - cars are more reliable than men lol - mine will be a sad poem:-) hugs Jan xx
Murray Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 9:07 AM
Not too sad I hope Jan.....
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