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Rusted Busted Dusted

Remember December? Us newly wed. Setting off on honeymoon in Thunderbird by Ford. Eloping abroad. Down Mexico way. Being so in love Under the stars. Sleeping rough in Thunderbird by Ford. Eventually it rusted. Down Mexico way. Darling children. Up and gone. Still I have you and Thunderbird by Ford. Engine almost had it's day Down Mexico way.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/11/2016 10:02:00 AM
I liked it...good luck!
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Jean Murray
Date: 6/11/2016 11:13:00 AM
Thank you James.
Date: 6/11/2016 8:21:00 AM
Great take on the theme Jean - cars are more reliable than men lol - mine will be a sad poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jean Murray
Date: 6/11/2016 9:07:00 AM
Not too sad I hope Jan.....

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