Paul Callus Poet Acrostic

Rusted

Roused from deep slumber
Unaware of my whereabouts,
Slouched in undignified stance,
Time-warped and busted
Eroded, at the end of the road...
Did I hear a carer's voice? 

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25th June 2016
Contest: Rusted & Busted
Sponsor: Casarah Nance

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Harry Horsman June 29, 2016 at 4:37 AM Oh this is clever poetry, you say it so profoundly, and more important, meaningful. Paul Callus June 29, 2016 at 1:24 PM Thank you for the uplifting comments, Harry. Pleased that you like it! ~ Regards // paul

Constance La France June 28, 2016 at 3:11 PM Paul, I feel the pain of the time warped and busted, in your lines, and this is a winner to me ~ Paul Callus June 29, 2016 at 1:27 PM Many thanks Constance; glad to be a winner in your eyes:) Warm regards ~ paul

Nette Onclaud June 27, 2016 at 3:27 PM splendidly crafted depicting how really wasted and deteriorated this ride is, paul... you're in full gear, paul.. huggs Paul Callus June 27, 2016 at 5:12 PM Thank you, Nette...I might be in full gear, but sometimes I feel that I need a new gearbox:) Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen June 27, 2016 at 1:36 PM - Touching, but no other choice - Great written, Paul - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Paul Callus June 27, 2016 at 4:58 PM Thank you for a pleasant visit, Anne Lise; unfortunately it did not make it to the final list! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison June 25, 2016 at 7:17 PM Oh Paul this is a sad take on the theme - no fun getting older is it :-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Paul Callus June 26, 2016 at 2:20 AM No...it isn't!! so I pretend I'm getting younger, instead! Thanks for stopping by....hugs // paul