poem written based upon above image--for online poetry class
poem submitted to "1455 Short Poem" contest, Brian Strand Sponsor, March 22, 2026
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Tarnish slow surrender~ iron weeps orange tears. The patient bite of time unkind. Decay.
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