Rural Thoughts

Shadows deep Hold secrets swarming Within an untold mind Reach for Aspens Painted on portraits Viewed by the Leaping sun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Smith Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 4:03 PM
I love this one Rhoda, natures artist is the one true master...
Galgiani Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 1:06 PM
Thank you for the comment and the read. Means a lot to me that my poetry is becoming to another artist...rg
Lamoureux Avatar
November 1, 2016 at 8:57 PM
You said a lot with such few words.
Galgiani Avatar
November 1, 2016 at 9:04 PM
Thank you again - yes, I have been known to be a bit 'Gabby'. Best to you...rg
Green Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 11:37 AM
This was beautiful, the scene it creates is vivid and I can relate. There are always secrets in the shadows which eventually will be revealed.
Galgiani Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 6:35 PM
Thank you for your comment - yes shadows can be very secretive, good and bad. Let's hope the dark shadows stay hidden...LOL rg
Sands Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 3:48 PM
I like this one.
Galgiani Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 10:38 PM
Thank you for the read and comment. Looking forward to reading you also...rg
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