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Rupture

Early morning rumbling sound As shouting people run around Remembering the former bout Trembling world near wiped us out Hoping soon the nightmare ends Quivering, quaking terrain bends Underneath the fallen land Aftershocks almost as grand Kneeling down we hope and pray Earthquake's terror goes away

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Date: 6/24/2011 10:23:00 AM
Hi Randy, you've captured so much in this acrostic on earthquakes-- Japan definitely came to mind and the recent earthquake again-- You are right, we all could hope and pray... thanks for sharing...
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