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Runs In the Family

She sat there
Reaching for another
A third a fourth a fifth
She’d lost count and
Wasn’t keeping track
Thought no one else was
She didn’t care
No one else was drinking

There was no difference
Between her and
Her alcoholic brother
Other than the opportunity
The one within her grasp
She chose to throw away



AP: 3rd place 2020

Posted on September 17, 2019

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Date: 9/18/2019 4:46:00 PM
We all have burdens to bear. What is important is how we deal with our burdens. Well written Line
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Date: 9/18/2019 8:52:00 PM
So very true, Timothy.
Date: 9/17/2019 10:23:00 PM
life's choices... great write and so real.
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Date: 9/17/2019 11:39:00 PM
Very sad choices indeed. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Lewis.

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