Running Through a Childish Age

Let us set off through the gates with pace,
Running at fields like joyous kids; 
Then returning, telling lies to parents
About how lost we were in a world lost of trace 
Or route to send us back.
We carried on and found the track
Open up our arms, busy with touch and embrace.

We didn't speak how much we fell to love that night, 
Sitting down to tea that evening, 
Our parents faces fill with blank disbelieving
As we chuckled and choked upon our food. Ah, the delight 
In knowing the secret we kept from their world 

Started a grieving for kids they new once as themselves.
It was that we knew when being excused,
How they had grown up too that evening, breathing
With time, gone old to age 
And in amongst all the childish lies, 
Began a gradual leaving.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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December 17, 2008 at 12:23 PM
Congrats Louis on making it throught the first round. Good Luck in the finals. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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November 30, 2008 at 7:49 AM
Louis - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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November 17, 2008 at 8:49 AM
Louis - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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November 13, 2008 at 4:57 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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November 11, 2008 at 8:20 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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August 25, 2008 at 1:17 PM
Great poem. Congratulations Louis on your featured write of the week. Love, Shar
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August 25, 2008 at 11:37 AM
So much truth in your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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August 25, 2008 at 10:30 AM
Congratulatins on a well written clever write! Laura :)
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August 25, 2008 at 6:40 AM
Gotta enjoy every freakin' moment. It goes by much much too fast. Congratulations on a well deserved feature. Vince
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August 24, 2008 at 8:59 PM
Amazing how fast it all comes and goes - congrats on being featured
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